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Posted on Mar 13th, 2006 by LaSara : R/evolutionary. LaSara
Human love is so frail Your love is divine You are the one I seek to touch The core within the often impenetrable shell of humanity Your heart shines bright when there are no guards up and spills over when let to spill Fear blocks Your countenance I fall into "because" and am damned for a dog walking silent, darkened streets starving for light cold an hungered Let Her work Her works of wickedness Let her kill Her heart Let Her be loud and adulterous Let Her be shameless before men. Let my chest explode With Divine Love Let my Sacred Heart Burst into flame I long to burn eternally in this all-consuming fire These petty thoughts are nothing these fears as shadows I cower to phantoms When I could easily stand in the light Of eternal glory.
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Raymond : River-Sea-Rain
about 12 hours later
Raymond said

Powerful, moving. The story you tell is common. I recognize it.

LaSara : R/evolutionary.
about 19 hours later
LaSara said

Thank you, Raymond. I am working with somewhat traditional formats for devotional writings. Though thte core will not cahnge, this piece needs a little work. I’ll post the rewrite once it’s done.

jaBuddha : Buddha Bear
9 months later
jaBuddha said

Good job (as is).

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